I like the way you combine your understanding of grammar in what you are writing. It’s a great way to provide clarity and maybe a little humor at the same time. Congratulations to son#2 and his mother in passing the driver’s test!
‘It went from being a cool abstract thought to totally uncool and way more concrete— concrete like a cement wall that he was going to careen into, headlong, full speed.’ So good! I love ALL your essays. Enjoy England.
I like the way you combine your understanding of grammar in what you are writing. It’s a great way to provide clarity and maybe a little humor at the same time. Congratulations to son#2 and his mother in passing the driver’s test!
Yeah, I guess that's the goal, to be out of the sentence, but it's bittersweet.
‘It went from being a cool abstract thought to totally uncool and way more concrete— concrete like a cement wall that he was going to careen into, headlong, full speed.’ So good! I love ALL your essays. Enjoy England.